This is my new song. Oh! please comment. This is my new attempt on writing about Betrayal.
Oh baby! I don't wanna think anymore My feelings 've gone sore And my heart's turned stone cold Coz' it never expected to be sold What I feel is not a matter now I've never been so low I'll never forgive you for what you have done And now I feel I've always won You'll never be a part of me - And Am glad it was never meant to be What did I do to make you leave me You were the only there for me I never knew you never thought so . . . What do I do? - If only I knew Looking at you, walk with your new love I believe, I still live but dunno how I did things I didn't wanna do Of them all is falling in love with you Is it so a great crime That i still live with passing time To know your smiles are not for me To know your kisses are not for me And your love is for someone else oh! when will I ever get some sense
3 comments:
lol just chanced upon your blog, nice and emotional songs must say., but try n add a lil more rhyme to it... you say its not a poem, i say its fine then.
love this line -
I did things I didn't wanna do
Of them all is falling in love with you
Amazing!
Nice one :)The first four lines of the last paragraph is good.
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